What is one area in LGBT writing that I need to improve on with writing? Be honest.
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The Representation - Not everything is solid
The Characterization - I have a hard time connecting with your characters
The Plot - character motivations in correspondence to the plot, are off.
The character challenges aren't relevant to the character
Your storytelling skills might potentially lack structure
The lack of deep meaning - I don't always understand where your stories are heading
You have a hard time blending sexuality into plot structures.
Your character's self discovery is limited by their universe
A different reason (explain why) I love critiques, so please give them! Don't be afraid!
You will get a virtual hug if you leave suggestions in the comments <3

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Don't be afraid of hurting my feelings! I can take it!!! I find critiques to be very useful, and fun! I actually really enjoy them, and I love giving them too. 

Every person who comments suggestions, gets a virtual hug and a thank you, and if you have something you want me to critique, feel free to point it out! <3

Seriously guys. Don't be afraid to tell me. I want to know, so I can improve! <3