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Lock Me  Away Marcilyn Locket Page 1 by Vivyi Lock Me  Away Marcilyn Locket Page 1 by Vivyi
Meet Royal Inventor Marcilyn - a hobbyist artist and a young inventor who's best friends with Princess Estelle. 

Xe are in love with Princess Estelle - who's an avid reader of dry books, and also helps out occasionally with the inventors.

Estelle is the Princess of Netheron, and rightful inherent of the throne - but to Marcilyn... she's xyr best friend. 

One day... Marcilyn starts to see Estelle differently. To xem, xyr feelings are strange, weird, unordinary. 

Can xe come to term with her feelings? And does Estelle feel the same?


Author's Note:

The start of our adventure to looooooooove

I tried over and over to make this page look good x'D But alas, it just didn't flow the way I wanted it to lmao I redid this at least 3 times sooooo yep

I am going to try not to be a perfectionist on this though haha... after all, I want this to look decent, but it's only for fun too! But that said, I am taking critiques for pages as well... so please critique me if you have any ideas to help me for future comic making :heart:

Marcilyn is my favorite person ever lmao I love xem

I promise I will get into the groove of this eventually... and the next page will be even better ;D


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missmagicgirl Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2018
This is a beautiful first page! I love your art style and I look forward to the next one so much! You are so talented! Heart 
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww thank you so much! :heart: I'm glad you think so <333 I will do my best! :D
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Summer-Peaches Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh I really like that second panel! Marcilyn looks so cute there :D I love the bright vivid colors!!! Let's hope she gets the right materials :XD:

I'm a little confused by the pronouns, though :o I noticed you say "she" and "her" but then also "xe" and "xem," so it's a little confusing ^^;

Also the words are a teeni bit too tini for my bad eyes :XD: 


I'm looking forward to more and so good to finally see a comic from you ;) 
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you <33 I'm very glad you like the vivid colors! And ohh yes, let's hope she does!

Ahhh my bad ^^; Truth be told, I mainly aim to address Marcilyn by xe/xem, but sometimes I slip and say she/her because  Marcilyn uses he/him, she/her, and xe/xem in the prequel itself and was originally established as a female main character.  I will correct this in the description and future comics, thank you!

Ohhh my bad XD It's the layout... I need to change it. I will crop this a bit, and then see about expanding the size since dA's default size doesn't cover it. Truth be told, it's hard on my eyes too... they are bad too LMAO

Ahhh thank you so much <333 I'm glad to finally get it out there :)
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
The comic style in indeed extraordinary!

Oh myy... if Estelle is being needy, Marcy's gonna have a difficult time! :XD:
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!! I've tried super hard at making it look appealing XD

Haha! You just never know what a princess might want in the end ;D
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