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Character Relationships Part 1 by Vivyi Character Relationships Part 1 by Vivyi
The first part of a... who knows how many part series xD Inspired by a lovely thing that lydiakencana showed me through PM. This should simplify a lot of thing with the characters and plot. Next part will contain Estelle's reaction to all of the major side characters, Then Marcilyn's reactions to all of the main side characters, Otto's reactions to all of the main sides. Then the last one will be Antagonist reactions, other than Yvette (unless I can fit those in there XD ) Mae herself, I'll save for when I'm working on the first book. ;) Since her character isn't exactly fleshed out as much as I'd like her to be!

The Current Version of this is Draft 3, Version 2 of the Prequel. Relations of the characters may still bounce around during editing, as I'm still writing out the scenes of each chapter. <3

I shall be posting this on a new tumblr blog as well. 

You can read more about Netheron on my blog Vivienne C. Waltzer
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Obelis Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
*testing*
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Vivyi Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
*replies* Hope you can see this
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Obelis Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! I got a notification!
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Vivyi Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yaaaaay :heart:
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Obelis Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It seems I can reply, too!
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Vivyi Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That's great! Me too XD
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It's useful to have such charts when you need to quickly remember information. :nod: Way easier than going through pages and pages of script.

Looks like Estelle's and Marcilyn's relationship has made both of them stronger! :happybounce: 

I wonder what was the story between Otto's cousins and Marcilyn. :notimpressed: From the hints, doesn't seem like a fun event at all.

Otto seems to have had relationship with almost everyone. :lol: What a playboy.
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed :nod: I should copy and paste this into evernote and make more. I forgot to make the rest after all :'D

Yess~ they're probably the only ones who have had an overall positive relationship XD I feel bad for everyone else... LOL

It isn't XD I think I do touch upon it briefly in the prequel. It's one reason Marcilyn hates Otto in the beginning of the story ;P

LMAO Indeed~ ALL of the three main characters hahahahaha lol
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Obelis Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Writing relationships full with flaws is useful for you as writer, though. :nod: Flaws are one of the things that makes stories flow forward.
We must hurt our characters to make them more interesting. Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] That's writer's fate.

Hmm, so Otto has a thing for main characters? I see.Cat nods 
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed!!! Flaws can sometimes make or break a character, especially when used as a story element. Hurting our characters can result in a good story if handled carefully and not overdone :nod:

Indeed :XD:

Ohoh yes he does :XD: He's got  a thing in general for everybody XDDD Well that's an exaggeration, but still ;P
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lydia-san Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is perfect!! Now I can memorize everything easier :3
Mae: "takes a large distase to him" why does everyone hate Otto? lol poor man xD
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Edited Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you <33 I'm glad you think so!

"why does everyone hate Otto?" I know right? I need to treat my male characters better xD It's been pointed out to me that I'm either burdening the most on my male characters, or making them into villains. >< I have no idea what I'm going to do about that... except maybe make a male character who doesn't have any problems xD The only character I can think of so far, who's good and has little issues, is Mr. Monette :) 
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lydia-san Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
trolololol yea poor Otto xD
but I think it's okay to make character like him, he draws sympathy.
Besides, a character with no issue is not interesting at all.
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missmagicgirl Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
Oh this is great! Nice to get this kind of over view :) I look forward to more :) 
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Vivyi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you <33 I'm glad you like it! :D I'll probably work on the next version over the weekend, so until then!
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missmagicgirl Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
Yay! Sounds great! :D 
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